https://youtu.be/kQrbNZn2Urg
The feedback I got on my last pitch was relatively minimal. I did a good job of fixing my pitch after the first one but still had to fix a few things about discomfort and stiffness. I wanted to be more relaxed yet still professional and I think this worked well.
Hi Benjamin, you delivered a really good sales pitch. You explained your viewers about why the problem you are working on is necessary very well. I think your confidence has increased vastly over the previous pitches. You structured your pitch very well. Also, I think that your goal of being a bit relaxed yet still professional was a really good addition to the pitch. Great post!
ReplyDeleteHi Benjamin,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed listening to your elevator pitch. The only thing I would change would be to open up with something else than “allow me a moment of your time” maybe something more intriguing like a hook or a statistic about the problem at hand. I feel this would help the pitch become more intriguing. Either way, your pitch was great overall, keep up the good work!